Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday 13 June 2021
winter sport circus
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Eva, Emilee here from NBC. I really like how you told everyone what you did in such detail that I can picture it in my mind. This reminds me about the time I went to a circus and they did tricks like you did. How come the trick on the flying hoop was called the mermaid?
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been to a real circus before?
Thank you Emilee. It is called the mermaid because it looks like you have a fin i am pretty shor.
DeleteHey Eva Its me Mayah In your class, I really like how you were showing your kindness and happiness I believe you checked back and double checked to see if you made mistakes the grammar is very good, i enjoyed reading your winter sports, Maybe next time add a question!
ReplyDeleteWhats your favorite sport?
Thank you Mayah. You are right i should add a question.
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