Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 17 April 2020
My birthday was last Friday on April the tenth. I got lots of presents and had the best day. Mum made it extra special, when i woke up the lounge and table were decorated in streamers and balloons. For breakfast we made pancakes they were delicious. After breakfast we played with all of my new toys, my favourite was my our generation food truck. Then we went for a bike ride around our neighbourhood and looked for the teddy bears in the windows. I went to my dads house to see him and he gave me chocolate, money and a can of coke. When i got home i video called my cousins and some school friends and my grandma and uncle rang me. At dinner time we had homemade mcdonalds and mum made me a strawberry and vanilla cake, it had a chocolate pink flower on top with a little fairy inside of the flower and a dragon guarding it. Then we watched charlie and the chocolate factory and had popcorn, fizzy and lollies. Then i went to bed it was a very fun day.
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Hi Eva
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday for last week Eva. Wow, it sounds like you had the most fantastic day. I like how you have described your birthday cake I can picture in my mind what it looked like....it is making me hungry :)
Sarah
Yay Eva you did one i miss you so so so oh sooo much look foward to seeing you again! Emilee
ReplyDeletesounds like you had a good birth day
ReplyDeletethanks Emilee i miss you to !!!! 💕💖💗...!!!.
ReplyDeletetanks Sarah !!!💘
ReplyDeletetanks Lily. Do you no my midell name is Lily to !!!💘💖😋😆.
ReplyDeletehi eva
ReplyDeletethanks Londyn !!!!♥♥♥♥♥💖
ReplyDeletegrat blog posti love it EVA
ReplyDeletegood job EVA GRACE
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