Friday 23 October 2020

A moment in time at the swimming pool.

 WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.


I arrived at the pools with my bag and my towel, togs and goggles. When I got there I went to the changing room and got into my togs. After I went to the pools first I went to the lazy river. I got pushed by the rushing water. After I went on the hydroslide! I had to get a wrist band so people know I can go on it. I had to wait till the light went green so I could go down the hydroslide! While I was going down the slide I hit a big bowl! Then it turned pitch black and I screamed! When I got out it was time to go. When I was heading home I got an ice block. It was delicious! 

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 November 2020 at 11:35

    HI Eva
    I like how you described your story. It sounds like you had a fantastic time.I really like going on the hydroslide too. Next time could you add who went with you?

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  2. Anonymous9 November 2020 at 13:51

    Hi Eva I like that you how you feel.
    What was your Favourite thing there?
    from charlie

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