WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.
I arrived at the pools with my bag and my towel, togs and goggles. When I got there I went to the changing room and got into my togs. After I went to the pools first I went to the lazy river. I got pushed by the rushing water. After I went on the hydroslide! I had to get a wrist band so people know I can go on it. I had to wait till the light went green so I could go down the hydroslide! While I was going down the slide I hit a big bowl! Then it turned pitch black and I screamed! When I got out it was time to go. When I was heading home I got an ice block. It was delicious!
