Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Hamilton. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday 2 July 2020
Argument
Firstly your hear will get all greasy and yuk this is bad because it will look bad and it wont be healthy.
Secondly your fingernails will get very very very dirty.
Finally you can get bacteria in you this could make you very sick .
Conclusion : it is extremely important to shower everyday because it keeps you clean and healthy .
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Hi Eva
ReplyDeleteThis is a very strong argument you have written!
Imagine having greasy hair everyday! Yuck!
Good job
-Clara
thank you Clara.
ReplyDeleteHey Eva
ReplyDeleteI strongly agree with you, i would not like my fingernails to be dirty! 😮
But anyway well done!
-Emilee
hi eva good blog post from charlie sutherland
ReplyDeleteHey Eva i strongly agree with you i would not like to have dirty fingernails but good job on a grate blog post
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