Thursday 2 July 2020

Argument

I strongly believe that we should have showers because we might get bacteria. Our hair might get all greasy . and our fingernails will get very dirty. we might get dirty feet. you code get really sick.

Firstly your hear will get all greasy and yuk this is bad because it will look bad and it wont be healthy.

Secondly your fingernails will get very very very dirty.

Finally you can get bacteria in you this could make you very sick .

Conclusion : it is extremely important to shower everyday because it keeps you clean and healthy .

5 comments:

  1. Hi Eva
    This is a very strong argument you have written!
    Imagine having greasy hair everyday! Yuck!
    Good job
    -Clara

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  2. thank you Clara.

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  3. Hey Eva
    I strongly agree with you, i would not like my fingernails to be dirty! 😮
    But anyway well done!
    -Emilee

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  4. hi eva good blog post from charlie sutherland

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  5. Hey Eva i strongly agree with you i would not like to have dirty fingernails but good job on a grate blog post

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