My comic on feedback

 During cybersmart  lessons we have been learning about the three main  reasons why we do blog posts.

- To celebrate learning

- To teach others 

- To get feedback

I created a comic of feedback.

A girl called Lizzy

WALT: write a limerick poem. Line 1,2 and 5 rhyme.Line 3 and 4 rhyme.

There once was a Girl called Lizzy, 

She had a very nice friend called Izzy

They had hair the same,

And they made a game,

That game made both girls very dizzy.

My hybrid animal

WALT: write an accurate description of 2 animals merged into 1.

My hybrid animal has long ears and  fluffy hair at the top of its head. It is grey and green and it is a small animal and very short.  It eats carrots, it can be a pet and it can be wild too. It's hops around inside and its ears are pink. 

This animal swims in the ocean and in lakes. It eats fruit and leaves. It has a  green, hard shell on its back that it uses for its house.

What animals do you think make up my hybrid animal?

Mountain lions

                                                           MOUNTAIN LIONS

Mountain lions are North America's biggest wildcat and they weigh up to 200  pounds. A male is  about one-third bigger than a female and their tail  is  2-2.7 feet.

  Mountain lions have a nice caramel colour fur and they can have any colours of eyes. They have a hump  on their back and sharp teeth to hunt for food. They have a long tail and big pointy ears to hear the Predators. 

A mountain lion is very shy and protective of their babies because they don't want their babies getting hurt by the older mountain lions. It will eat any animal.

A mountain lion is a good  animal to write about  and I learnt a lot that is why I chose it .

Dinner Play....A Poem by Jane Buxton

This is one of my favourite poems that is from a poetry book belonging to my Mum when she was a little girl.

In Room 4 we have been learning to use Screencastify....this is my first go at it.

Friday field trip

 On November the 6th room 4 and room 1 went on a field trip. First the bus picked us up from school and dropped us off at Margaret Mahy. It was a bit nippy at first then it warmed up. My favourite part was the twirly whirly slide. It is green and  silver and it is so much fun. After we had a play at Margaret Mahy, we walked to Turanga the  town library and when we got there we made a native bird out of lego. After that me and my friends  played with the dress up’s and after we went on the slide. After everyone had finished playing we walked to the Museum. When we got there we learned some games from the olden days. We all got into buddies to play the game. It was so much fun. After that we went into a man's classroom to learn some other games such as snakes and ladders. After that it was time to go on the bus so we got on the bus and left. The bus dropped us off at school, we got our bags, went to the playground, had a play and then it was time to leave.

A moment in time at the swimming pool.

 WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.

I arrived at the pools with my bag and my towel, togs and goggles. When I got there I went to the changing room and got into my togs. After I went to the pools first I went to the lazy river. I got pushed by the rushing water. After I went on the hydroslide! I had to get a wrist band so people know I can go on it. I had to wait till the light went green so I could go down the hydroslide! While I was going down the slide I hit a big bowl! Then it turned pitch black and I screamed! When I got out it was time to go. When I was heading home I got an ice block. It was delicious!